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dream
Contributed by
silverpoppy
on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 01:26:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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it feels like a dream
i could jump off the second story
and fly away
far away from the prision of this life
away from my-self
and my hurtful ways
here i go
i jump
and fly, briefly
but it wasn't a dream
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silverpoppy
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2005-01-14 01:26:03]
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Re: dream
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by hellsfallenangel on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 08:47:54 AM AEST
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hey this is a kool poem i like it alot well g2g bye
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Re: dream
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by Jezabel on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:15:14 AM AEST
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| i wouldn't. good write tho luv |
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Re: dream
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by wolfman on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 01:41:34 PM AEST
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interestin. it does feel like that when you are at the edge but there is always that sence of what if this isnt a dream? but the alure of that fe3eling does sometimes get the best of you.
this was a very good write (even though it was a little short) I did like it, please post again soon.
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Re: dream
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 05:01:42 PM AEST
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| I like this...good write. |
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Re: dream
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:21:08 PM AEST
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| death is a worse prison than life. at least in life you have an escape. in death, theres no way out of it. |
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