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I can see your heart in your eyes
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 01:28:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I can see your heart in your eyes
Safety is for ever it is heaven to me and I will not let it go
The warmth is
Everlasting
The glow
Of love
Deeply
Sooths
All of
My pain
And I want
To hold on
I feel foolish
As if trying hard
To not awaken
From this sleep
These dreams
I keep having
So sweetly of you
They make me want
To be with you there
To be here and back again
With you for always crossing
But the sun is rising and it is almost
Time for me to awaken again
And the magic lingers
As I hear the morning
The birds chirping
The breeze and droplets
Water from last night storm
Trickle down on to my tin roof
My eyes open as to look upon
The bits of sun light that pierce
The black out cloth I have
Covering my window keeping
Out the light of day so that I can
So that I can sleep for just a little
A little bit longer than I really need to
My eyes are open now and my mother calls
I wonder if you are a dream I wonder if we ever really met
If we ever really fell in love and I ask can I love a dream
I think I would have no other love than a dream
My dreams are a sacred place that I do not want to leave
You are to perfect and I am sure you are a dream
How else could you love me in such a way?
Robin Schwerdt
R- Rarest beauty my eyes have ever seen
O- Only she can make me feel this way
B- Blinded by her eyes I see nothing else
I- In love with her in this life, in all to come
N- Nothing means more to me than her
S- Streaming tears of joy spill from me
C- Cant stand it not hearing her voice
H- Heaven knows no bounds when its from her lips
W- Words cant begin to express what lips can say
E- Everything is what I would give to be with her
R- Rapture for her consumes me whole
D- Derelict is how I would feel with out her
T- This is the girl I want to be the one for me
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Re: I can see your heart in your eyes
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 08:40:14 AM AEST
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beautifull poem, exquisited in it's presentation, a
splended peice of written . . .
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Re: I can see your heart in your eyes
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 12:32:37 PM AEST
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| Wow this is simply beautiful and heartfelt.nicely written. |
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Re: I can see your heart in your eyes
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by Gothchyk on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 06:51:26 PM AEST
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| awwwwwe, beautifully written. |
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Re: I can see your heart in your eyes
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by afterdark on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:27:05 PM AEST
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| This was very well wrote and put down...I liked the last part of it.. |
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Re: I can see your heart in your eyes
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 10:11:51 AM AEST
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This is really lovely..the acrostic is perfect!!
Jenni |
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Re: I can see your heart in your eyes
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by julieh on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 10:57:15 AM AEST
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| This is so beautiful and full of love ....such a lucky girl! take care and cherish each other always ju |
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