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Old Man
Contributed by
Unwanted_Angel
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Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 10:02:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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someday the old man will return with a laughing face to show me all my faults its dark and lonely and no ones here just wait for the hours for the spirits to appear the old man taught me all kinds of love some that kills and some that loves in this world our lives will obtain security , justice and pain but as always just let the flower be and let it bloom and set the bee just free just let the old man die and peacefully sigh with a laughing heart that never dies he shared his wisdom and gave me faith to leave it now just be so brave
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Re: Old Man
(User Rating: 1 ) by sojourner on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 10:28:19 PM AEST (User
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Interesting poem,Unwanted _ angel,sad but it has a touch of beauty in the way it flows.
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