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blood and tears, you and me
Contributed by
visualizing_life
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Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:18:06 AM in AEST
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blood and tears go together
like you and me
nothing alike
but so much in common
blood flows over pain, hurt, and anger
tears flow over pain, tradjidy and despair
yet both spilled often
but for different reasons
how are they alike?
...they are both spilt over you...
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Re: blood and tears, you and me
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by TaintedSoul on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 03:16:01 PM AEST
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Succinct write and truly profound. I find that love and hate walk hand in hand ... and through your words I've found that blood and tears are the same as well. Perhaps all emotions, when boiled down, are one and the same. It is merely the tone in which they are expressed that shows their shades.
peace
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Re: blood and tears, you and me
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by lovingkk05 on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 03:41:57 PM AEST
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That is a good poem. I really liked how you used bllod and tears to represent everything. BEcause now that I look at everyone inthere life bleeds and cries right? They like go together. Well when someone finds the right person for them it's the same exact way.
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Re: blood and tears, you and me
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by assassinatorgirl on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 08:13:10 AM AEST
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| i like this one a lot too. it's also very true. good job =) and you should post some more poems i like 'em. |
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Re: blood and tears, you and me
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by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:50:37 PM AEST
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this one is really good too....it makes so much sence to me
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