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Walls

Contributed by EverlastingDawn on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 06:55:46 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



No one knows me
I didn’t let them
Even as a child

At age five
I learned the world
The harshness and cruelty

So I built a wall
So no one could see
Now no one knows
The real me

So when you came
It was hard for me
So I lied
I wouldn’t let you see

My wall fell down
Once or twice
So now I see the truth

You didn’t want to see me
Just mold me to your liking

I should have known
No one sees me

So I said what you wanted
And bent to your wishes
Out of fear of your power

I thought you were my friend
My sister

But your wall
I didn’t see
Because my wall
Is too strong for me




Copyright © EverlastingDawn ... [ 2005-01-14 18:55:46]
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Re: Walls (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 07:03:27 PM AEST
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I don't really understand this one. But still great poem. Kind of sad. I hope things get better for you.

Spazzo


Re: Walls (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:18:59 PM AEST
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Great write my dad has a wall only i can seem to break it but yea we all have some kinda wall keep it up




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