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Lost Farewell
Contributed by
doodley_5
on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 07:12:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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He screams....
I cry..
He says he hates me
I want to die
-the pain I feel is so stronge that im hollow inside
-it eats away at my every whim
-it becomes to much to bear
I say I hope he dies for all the lies and pain he has caused
I dont know what I have done....
I dont know what to do....
I am scared and lost... sitting on the cold floor of my bathroom
I walk to a cabnet and grab a blade
It is time to say farewell to the world...
because I dont know what I have done..
I slowly press the blade against my wrist
I slide it across my pale, white skin
blood imediately immerses from the wound...
it stings so bad - theres nothing left to do
Im lost in the world
I go a little deeper with the next slide of the blade
I begin to feel faint
My head gets woosy
I turn around
Lay my head on his bloody body
He is cold - with the knife sticking through his heart
I say farewell to my love
For I am lost without you
Everything begins to get darker
My breaths begin to shorten
and now....
Im Lost.
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doodley_5
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2005-01-14 19:12:19]
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Re: Lost Farewell
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 07:38:19 PM AEST
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| I really felt this poem, I also pray you never really do this to yourself. Keep writing and leave the blade alone. good luck... |
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Re: Lost Farewell
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by afterdark on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 08:11:34 PM AEST
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| This is about as deep as a puddle |
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