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Ache
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 10:19:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Suicide is a happy thought for me
For I am nothing to anyone anyways
I'm torn apart by you all
I'm cut apart by a saw
But I'm suppose to shut up and apoligize
Turn face and compromise
My Ache, You Betray
Death is the end
Like the last chapter in a book
It's always the best
It ends the ache and shakes the mind of the reader
It makes everything "bitter"... sweeter
Death is the end of pain, no more shame
Now do you understand why I'm tired of this game?
You Betray Me
I am Tired of pain
There is only one antidote for it
I contradict my self
I love pain, It's my escape
But does not help stop the Ache
The Ache of wanting someone I can't have
Someone I want so bad
I cannot have you because you do not want me
You see...You Betray Me
I'm ugly and nobody cares
I have no pulse, yet I'm still alive
Scent of blood I smell It's mine
From my wrist it drains
It slowly falls to the floor
It's pumped deep from my core
My mind pauses for a second
To think what I have done
But I find myself in my bed
Dreaming, about my Ache
Like I said... You Betray Me
Spit it out you hate me, But I love you
Pound me into your heart, I wish I could
Walk away and forget you, I should
Staple me to your face, Like paper to wood
I have no place in life except Hate
It soothes my soul But irritates the Ache
My cold ugly face is the only thing you see
You're to blind to see, You Betray Me
The final Ache is trying to leave
Up my shirt and down my sleeve
But when this one is gone a new one will be born
All the torment and the pain will rise again
It all starts again in a big circle
Of My Ache for you
I Betrayed You!
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-01-14 22:19:12]
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Re: Ache
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 12:57:33 AM AEST
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| i liked many of your verses in this...okay all of them. very good first post. |
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Re: Ache
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by blueeyedevil13 on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 06:27:21 AM AEST
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i love this poem. i cannot describe how it makes me feel, it is excellent, you should keep writing. well done
avril |
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Re: Ache
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 10:53:50 PM AEST
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well i saw that you were on ypdc still, which made me think of the old times, and how i used to be a guy (heh). i also wondered if you first post was as good as i remembered it, and yes im still proud of you and your work from this time. i dont care about you say clark, your early pieces will always hold something special because afterall through those spelling mistakes your talent shone brighter than most of the people ive seen on here. all of them.
"Suicide is a happy thought for me
For I am nothing to anyone anyways"
you are someone to me, big bro. your little brother (or as you have found out, little sister =]) (hopes many people are confused by this comment and her masculinity. =]] and yes...you are a lifehouse fan for life, lol.... |
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