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All Gone
Contributed by
Friend7299
on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:58:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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It happened two days ago she left me
This hole in my heart and the ache won't leave
The cry of my kids could be heard as she drove away
Daddy, Daddy we want to stay
Emptiness and silence are so ominious now
My family lost and gone away for good
It was over a stupid thing and I can't remember now
What it was or who even started it
I feel the knots in my stomach wind tighter still
Tears are there ready to fall
I ache so bad and long for her touch
She took my reason for living away
The phone rang that night and I hoped it was her
It was my best friend to see how I was
Again it rang and not sure who would call now
I picked it up and said hello
The voice on the phone was not familiar at all
It sounded quite like no one I did know
It was the police to let me know
An accident occured 50 miles from home
I clutched the phone as he said I am sorry to say
The car is a wreck and no one did live
I dropped the phone and curled up and cried
They are gone now for good for they have died
Please bring them back I cannot bear to live
I need my family I need to give
I want to say it is all alright
Come home my darling and sleep with me tonight
Those who read this remember now this
Try not to argue to this point
Solve your problems and don't walk away
For either of you might not live another day
Copyright ©
Friend7299
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2005-01-14 23:58:59]
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Re: All Gone
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 07:33:07 AM AEST
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This is so sad but written well.
I'm so sorry for your losses. I'm sure it must hurt really bad but hang in there, friend.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: All Gone
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 03:09:25 PM AEST
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| thats terrible. i mean, the poem is great. i feel sick and scared, and thats a tribute to the write. i always hate that great poety normally comes from great sadness. but is it a great poem. i can onyl send my condolences for your great sadness |
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Re: All Gone
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 04:36:20 AM AEST
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Sorry it took me so long to get back to u. I had to come back and read it again to remember. I read lotssa poetry here and have some on other sites.
I felt like weeping and probably did which i also needed, smile.
thanks for telling me that it was fiction 'cause u broke my heart with this one.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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