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Exploded
Contributed by
eternalnight4x
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Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 08:38:11 AM in AEST
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Inside Im dying
Withering away
Given up crying
Im paving the way
To the doorway of hell
My pre-destined fate
Compelled to dwell
Where torment awaits
For committing this sin
Where I end it all
I exploded within
Now others will fall
With this knife at my hand
The corpses collect
From this vile land
I had earned no respect
Now others will pay
Held my anger to long
I had broken that day
You may say I was wrong
Killing all in my path
But my fault it was not
I exploded in wrath
All fairness forgot
Then when Ive had my fill
Ill take this knife
And against my will
I end my life
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2005-01-15 08:38:11]
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Re: Exploded
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 08:54:51 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
U want burn in hell after death for killing yourself or any one else.
Hell is here on Earth. We make our own hells but the god i serve will always luv u no matter what. he wouldn't put any one in an eternally burning place some where. How sadistic would that be?
hugs, prayer,
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Re: Exploded
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 05:12:44 PM AEST
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I also believe that Earth is hell, but I wanna get out of this place...i hate it and everything on it! Good poem...very sad...i know how feel bro...if you ever need to talk send me a message...
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