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DECIEVER
Contributed by
olasunkanmi
on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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In the midst of the not-yet
I felt some heavenly cold
my head became a burden to my physique
saw her pass me by
not in her world
she must had gone with the cowries
counted my legs after her
perhaps a revelation awaits me
but I saw her no more
olasunkanmi rasheed igbalajobi
kanmmy2@yahoo.com
Copyright ©
olasunkanmi
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2002-12-05 14:00:00]
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Re: DECIEVER
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by Elisabeth on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 04:33:10 AM AEST
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| Interesting write. |
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Re: DECIEVER
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by olasunkanmi on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 08:34:06 AM AEST
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| thanks for your comment better still are you born again the devil is a deciever |
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Re: DECIEVER
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 09:28:14 AM AEST
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The devil is what i call a sabotage...I enjoyed this poem alot thanks for sharing it..it has strong words ...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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