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Float on
Contributed by
absentangel69
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Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 06:00:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I fly high
In these suicide clouds
Choking out my last breath
Only to walk into you
No escape
Can't be without you
Always on my heart
Never alone
To fly alone
With you nagging my head
Taking my breath away
My sucide mission
Is to go on
Without you
But we all float on
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2005-01-15 18:00:57]
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Re: Float on
(User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 08:26:30 PM AEST
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'I fly high, In these suicide clouds'
nicenice...not too long, not much form...good ending...keep it up..
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