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I Let You Go
Contributed by
daydreamer22
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Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 08:53:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Today I found out we have no future
We cannot be together
I knew this would happen
There were too many problems with it
I have cried so many tears for you
Lain restless in my bed
But not now
I thought this would upset me
Though it did not
I had accepted what was to come
Before it had the chance to happen
I was sure of this ending
I am still very much in love with you
Always will be
I have experienced so many new feelings with you
I let you go, hoping you will come back someday
It would prove you were always mine
My feelings are stronger now more than ever for you
I wish you a happy life
Whether it is with me later on
Or with another
I hope that you will be happy whoever you end up with
I had the time of my life
You were the best thing in it
Friends always you promised
I will hold you to it...
Copyright ©
daydreamer22
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2005-01-15 20:53:50]
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Re: I Let You Go
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 09:05:10 PM AEST
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| This is very well wrote and it ran so smooth |
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Re: I Let You Go
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by sick_n_twisted on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 09:15:35 PM AEST
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| i love this poem thats how i feel right now this is such an awsome write!! great write!! |
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Re: I Let You Go
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 09:42:51 PM AEST
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Awesome write! It's soo good! I really liked the last two lines.
It's true what they say, "you never know what good you have, until it's gone."
Thanks for posting! |
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Re: I Let You Go
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by Stalkee on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 09:51:34 PM AEST
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| this was really good, a similar thing happened to me with a friend, they were supposed to move far away...but as things turned out...his parents found a way to stay here...maybe your love will be able to stay somehow? i hope, if they go, their return to you will be swift...great write |
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