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The Art of Falling?
Contributed by
psychofemale
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Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 10:38:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Falling in your eyes again,
can't stand up without you there,
in your heart I feel so bare.
Lost inside I feel it sting,
all the pain and joy you bring.
Can't control all I feel,
falling in your eyes again...
You fill me up with nothing at all,
inside again you hear me fall.
You hold your place hands tied up,
you don't care I took the jump.
You let me fall onto the surface,
this fall was tough, maybe the roughest.
Blood pours down, it tickles my face,
I sense it running, I now can taste...
The pain inside me now existing in you,
I'm losing my balance as I stand up confused.
I fall to the floor again once more,
I grasp through the dirt as I lay in the soil.
Of the earth and the flowers, the bugs and the grass,
wondering how long this pain will last.
I shut my eyes and pretend to fall,
in a pillow of feathers, in a bed filled with dolls.
Falling into a comfortable place,
and as I wake up my tears will erase.
I fell asleep and now I'm awake,
from jumping in dreams that hurt you so fake.
Maybe one day I'll fall into you,
and the pain will not hurt, cause those dreams are not true.
Copyright ©
psychofemale
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2005-01-15 22:38:18]
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Re: The Art of Falling?
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by psychofemale on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 10:42:23 PM AEST
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the first stanza got messed up....it's really this...
Falling in your eyes again,
tranquillizing all within.
Can't stand up without you there,
in your heart I feel so bare. |
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Re: The Art of Falling?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 10:47:23 PM AEST
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Good write. Really interesting to read.
Nice job. |
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Re: The Art of Falling?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 11:12:51 PM AEST
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| Good write,I enjoyed this,and also thanks for your comment. |
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Re: The Art of Falling?
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 11:37:26 PM AEST
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The first stanza didn't make any sense at all, but overall i liked the poem.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: The Art of Falling?
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by psychofemale on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 01:06:28 AM AEST
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| thanks very much! |
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