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To Me
Contributed by
juliette
on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Within a maze, fumbling through this room,
Too many sounds, I cant find you.
I took a spill, guess you took a few
Brings us here to what were going through.
And I would swallow you to keep you safe
Choke back the bitter, pissy taste
Of all your sins I cant erase
Another tainted soul in my embrace
It always feels like your woes outweigh my own
And if I needed you to
Could you just run home
To me?
Copyright ©
juliette
... [
2002-12-05 16:00:00]
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Re: To Me
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by Elisabeth on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 04:29:15 AM AEST
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| I think your ending fits well with the rest of the poem, actually. Good write. |
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Re: To Me
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by Sarah22 on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 11:25:54 PM AEST
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| great poem keep writing :*). |
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