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THE SEASONS
Contributed by
julieh
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Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 09:17:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The leaves have fallen from the trees
Feel the touch of gentle breeze
Summer flowers are no longer there
The garden looking rather bare
Winter is here for such a long time
I am longing for the sun to shine
The days are short,the nights are long
I long to hear the birds in song
Look out the window what do i see
A tiny flower peeping back at me
Bulbs are peeping through the ground
A field mouse,by the pond was running around
In an instant my heart is feeling brighter
Yes, those long dark nights are getting brighter
It wont be long before its spring
The trees will be full of birds that sing
The suns now peeking through those lazy clouds
They stay there all day just hanging around
Soon be time to tidy and prune
Give new life to the shrubs allow them to bloom
Creatures that sleep will now awake
Birds in a hurry with new nests to make
Autumn winter summer and spring
Have special things that they all bring
Autumn with colours of falling leaves
Winter with snow and ponds that freeze
Spring brings baby lambs and plants that grow
Summer brings life to all that we know
Copyright ©
julieh
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2005-01-16 09:17:27]
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Re: THE SEASONS
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:17:16 AM AEST
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Oh Julie, this is awesome!!! What great imagery you show in your poem. I really love it. Thank you for making my morning....
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Re: THE SEASONS
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by sean88 on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:32:06 AM AEST
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I thought this was great! I often sit and ponder over the changing seasons and to have writen a few poems concerning winter...but this this out does them all!So just again well done!
sean xxx |
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Re: THE SEASONS
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 05:48:05 PM AEST
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| Great write! Wonderful imagery!! |
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Re: THE SEASONS
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by SweetRhythm on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 10:53:10 AM AEST
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What a masterpiece. You really did paint a beautiful picture of our seasons. The poem had great rythem & flow throughout which made the read very enjoyable. Your talent shines through in this one. I just loved it, through & through!
Thanks for sharing with ypdc,
Corinna |
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