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SLEPPING WITH THE DEVIL
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:45:15 AM in AEST
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Blood is thicker than water
The saying for those who sow the wind,
So shall they reap the whirlwind
Calm streams create a raging torrent
Who's love will survive the abhorrent
Crimson words vehemently signed
Sleep well with presence of mind
Oh dreams of justice well disguised
Roses lay broken upon thorns of lies
Leave your conscience leave me in abyss
Plastic hugs wrapped in barbed wire remiss
Lost in this torment of his twisted schemes
Together with the devil embrace your dreams
Pictures of love torn memories in a book
Words of love spoken by hook or by crook
An angels love flowed with loving guidance
Betrayal that burns in flesh subsidence
Drowning in confusion deprived of air
Tears of despair fall from eyes beware
Feeding on pain with the pleasure inflicted
Don't sleep with the devil hell is predicted
Love Angelxx
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Re: SLEPPING WITH THE DEVIL
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by Mesano on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:26:04 AM AEST
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amazing poem, so well written and very good rhymes.. hope everything turns out okay...
-Nicki |
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Re: SLEPPING WITH THE DEVIL
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 12:48:06 PM AEST
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Words well woven, Angel..Great write....
Loved this..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: SLEPPING WITH THE DEVIL
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 01:57:48 PM AEST
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| one of the two favourite poems ive read on this site. keep it up! |
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Re: SLEPPING WITH THE DEVIL
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:30:11 PM AEST
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verry compeling poem ,reaches out in agony, one can feel the hurt and raw emotion,yet written beautifully your efforts r not in vain . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: SLEPPING WITH THE DEVIL
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by FleurdeSang on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:51:37 PM AEST
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Oh, sweetangel... I apologise for the pain that has befallen upon your precious soul... I send my deepest sympathies and hugs, hoping that it will make a dent... I hope she sees the true evil within him, that devil that slumbers alongside her.... An excellent release of the emotions within. Loved this piece! Trying to reach out, desperately wanting to tell her your feelings, but somehow, the words are tangled with your tongue, and they never come out... I know this feeling, cheri... I know it well.
It's always good to let it out some way: writing, drawing, jogging, singing, playing the piano, dancing, painting... All of us have different outlets. So glad you chose writing!Your work always has a piece of your heart and soul in it... Such flawless tales...
I hope this one will have a happy ending. Tell her how you feel, douce ange... Maybe things will get better. All my love and blessings as always!! Forever,
Your friend,
Stephy *Fleur* |
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Re: SLEPPING WITH THE DEVIL
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:41:46 AM AEST
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Sadly, we cant tell them who to love and the more we try the more they are determined to stay with them. A powerful write my friend
Roses
Larry |
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Re: SLEPPING WITH THE DEVIL
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:03:02 AM AEST
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Wow! powerful stuff, (very well written) I hope everything will be allright.
Johnny. |
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Re: SLEPPING WITH THE DEVIL
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by SimplyMe on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:04:57 AM AEST
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Oh wow! Sorry it took me so long to comment. I forgot how many people posted on my poem lol, so i just Re-checked it and saw your comment. You expressed yourself way better than i did. Lol. Great write. Now i'm gonna go read more of your poems. Can't wait to see them. ^.^
~Alucia~ |
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Re: SLEPPING WITH THE DEVIL
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 12:59:25 PM AEST
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Wow angel---I'm so glad I read this!!! What an inspiring write! Excellent and creative rhyming, that flows really well. The whole poem was fantastic, but the fourth stanza really stood out for me...Great job.
Scorp. |
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Re: SLEPPING WITH THE DEVIL
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 06:47:08 PM AEST
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Angel, this is such a compelling write that pulls staright at the heart. I feel ur pain and I hope your cousin wakes up to herself real soon. A thousand of heartfelt hugs to such a dear friend.
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Re: SLEPPING WITH THE DEVIL
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:28:59 PM AEST
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| Good advice - great poem! Rhyme's good, meter flows well. It's a keeper! Blessings, J. |
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Re: SLEPPING WITH THE DEVIL
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by Archie on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 12:30:38 PM AEST
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| Great poem. It must be hard going through that. I wish you and her the best. Maybe she will come around. |
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