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A space on the wall
Contributed by
Barrabhoy
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Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 06:26:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A picture comes off a deckhead
Now, a space beside a bed
A picture is then put away
A drawer is where it will stay
A picture is now out of sight
Try to forget it, especially at night
A picture that will not hide,
Even if it was thrown over the side
A picture of which I know every part
A picture, forever, in my heart.
Copyright ©
Barrabhoy
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2005-01-16 18:26:27]
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Re: A space on the wall
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 06:45:08 PM AEST
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| Same type topic told once again in the same old way |
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Re: A space on the wall
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:58:19 PM AEST
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Good write. Sad though.
I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Re: A space on the wall
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 09:48:26 PM AEST
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| excellent ending. even though its been done many times before, well worth the read. |
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