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These are my last words to you...
Contributed by
AlurTemptation
on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 06:49:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You said I had a problem...
You said I was insaine...
But I'm not sure what you were talking about,
For you're the one that caused this pain!
I've been up late at night crying,
Just wishing i would die.
But the funny thing about it is,
All this is over your lies!
You said you'd hold me!
you even said you loved me!
Too bad that those lies blinded me,
To the point that I couldn't see!
I tried to just forget about you.
I tried to keep myself control.
But I kept everything inside of me for so long,
That I began to exsplode!
So I telling you this right now!
Stay the out of my life!
Your nothing but a waste of my time!
br />I hope you die!!!
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AlurTemptation
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2005-01-16 18:49:47]
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Re: These are my last words to you...
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 06:53:05 PM AEST
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| It may have been good if not for all the blocked out words..Trust me on this I know best..You cannot put that in there..So I cannot comment here cause I could make out not a Goddamn thing |
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Re: These are my last words to you...
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by EternalNight4x on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:13:07 PM AEST
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| good angry write, if you cut down on the swearing though it would make it better |
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Re: These are my last words to you...
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 09:37:04 PM AEST
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| wow, i dont think eminem or ludacris is this explicit. excellent show of anger. i think that if you gave them this poem, they would get the point, clearly. |
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Re: These are my last words to you...
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by Moshi_Moshi on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 09:55:44 PM AEST
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| That was a good angry poem but I think it would have been better if you put the curse words in. |
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