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I Wish (The Night)
Contributed by
Froggy
on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:33:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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As i sit in my room,
Writing by candle-light,
I think about life,
And the peace of the night.
The air this night,
Undisturbed and Calm.
I wish upon my life,
To be like the air this night,
Knowing that only I,
Can make this change,
As a sandpaper tear
Rolls down my face,
It tears at my mask,
and leaves no trace,
I wish for you,
Not to see me,
For it's not who I am,
The anger, pain, and jealousy
Pain and anger,
I need it to go,
Love ever-lasting,
I want you to know,
For i wish,
To give you,
My life,
Complete and whole...
Copyright ©
Froggy
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2005-01-16 19:33:16]
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Re: I Wish (The Night)
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:39:14 PM AEST
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| Great write. I especially liked the ending. Good job. |
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Re: I Wish (The Night)
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:18:41 PM AEST
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| very nice. nice use of words also. |
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