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Contributed by
visualizing_life
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Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:02:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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im a poet writing of my pain
im a person living a life of shame
im a friend hiding my depression
im your sister making a good impression
im you friend acting like im fine
im a wisher wishing this life werent mine
im a girl who thinks of suicide
im a teen pushing my tears aside
im a student who doesnt have a clue
im the girl sitting next to you
im the one asking you to care
im you friend hoping youll be there when im gone
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Re: me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:04:07 PM AEST
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Awesome write.
Great flow. I enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: me
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by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:52:55 PM AEST
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| this was the one i rote by in your note book......its really good...it descibes you and the ryming is great |
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