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Thinking
Contributed by
Sinned
on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 09:04:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Thinking
Early morn
Coffee drips in its maker
I'm tinking Come'on
Its aromas fillin the air
Blankly I stare
Sleepy my mind yet to clear
Tossed and turned the night before
The pots nearly full I can hardly wait
Why do I awake this ungodly hour
Tinker thoughts cross my mind
Why am I me
Five fifteen central time
The coffee sputters its last drop
A little creamora and sweetner in a cup
Of course I slop
Wish I could write like other people
A retired factory worker is my fame
Painting and poetry I dip and dabble
Coffee taste great
A cup and two and another
A commener is my fate
I wish I could write like them and you
Poe or Robert Frost
I dream and wish I tell you true
Words invisible missels in the air
Reaching grasping nothing there
Thinking thoughts and my papers bare
Sinned
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Sinned
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2005-01-16 21:04:44]
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Re: Thinking
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 12:10:23 PM AEST
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Hey nice write. I felt your words . Keep up the good work. II read ya:-)
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Re: Thinking
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by blueyes11 on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:31:30 PM AEST
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This one was interesting and enjoyable to read, as are many of your poems. I especially liked this:
"Reaching grasping nothing there
Thinking thoughts and my papers bare"
Good job!
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