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Rain
Contributed by
xfrozenwindx
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Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:12:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She walked outside under the night sky
The rain sprinkled down upon her.
The flowers were gone, the ground was bare.
Harder. The rain came down.
Her tears mixed with the raindrops.
The clouds start to fade away
Uncovering the hidden sun behind.
Flowers were blossoming
The grass began to grow.
And she smiled for the first time.
Everything was anew.
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xfrozenwindx
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2005-01-16 22:12:00]
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Re: Rain
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:44:15 PM AEST
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| It does have a good message. Nice write :-) |
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Re: Rain
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:48:27 PM AEST
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| i like the message also. well maybe later you can revise this and make it one of your best while still keeping the message ::shrugs:: |
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Re: Rain
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 03:20:30 PM AEST
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oh this is beautiful.
i love the message as well.
'everything was anew'
you are phenomenal my dear.
- Bethani - |
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Re: Rain
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by HansiV on
Monday, 26th December 2011 @ 05:03:52 PM AEST
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| I like this type of poetry. Images are great. |
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