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Salvation From The Unkown
Contributed by
BeefieSmalls
on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:21:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Welcome to the world of the great unknown
You can forget everything that you were told
Now I have a story that takes over you
Are you prepared? Will you forever be true?
They haunt you, you know they do
The thought of them, well that scares me, too
You never had these demons before
Now you are fighting just to make it out the front door
Sorry girl, but that door is locked
You made the wrong choices
Now your only exits blocked
Salvation can be sought
Just look deep within
Salvation isn't wrong
Its just believing in him
No, not God, don't kid yourself
I told you to forget what you learned about
This is a comedy, no a tragedy
Well, when you find out you will finally see
That the person who is saving you, well that person it is me.
~Beefie Smalls~
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2005-01-16 23:21:22]
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Re: Salvation From The Unkown
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:52:55 PM AEST
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| i liked this write. i like how you wrote it. im not a religious person at all, well actually i am religious in what i believe in, and it isnt in this. but anyway. this didnt make me feel like you were pushing your belief on anyone like many others. i commend you on that. |
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