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Forever Alone
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 12:27:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Pick apart the pieces of the unknown
Paist them together and make me whole
This illusion of life that I live in
This dark tomb I am scentenced to live within
But these are the pills I am forced to take
These are the days I love to hate
But
With you I am able to be me
But you left me, and I am all alone
Alone in this dark demented day
Scratching and clawing, I have reached the bone
And
I am numb and insecure, in these brick walls
Cracked like pieces of concrete
Becouse I wont let you see the real me
You only see what I want you to see
I would do anything to be with you
But
You can't see the invisiable
You can't touch the untochable
You can't like what you can't see
And you and I will never be
And
I can't wait and exceed my time
Its pethetic I am this way
But tomarrows another day
I am the pieces and you are my whole
I can't control my shakes and I can't control this HeartAche
But
Ive always been alone, Blind and Numb
I Am
Forever Alone
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ForeverAlone
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2005-01-17 00:27:54]
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Re: Forever Alone
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 12:43:59 AM AEST
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| Wow...this is really great. I don't know what it is about it, but it left me speechless. It's got that special something. I enjoyed it. |
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Re: Forever Alone
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 12:44:40 AM AEST
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| brilliant times the sun. i love this. i would like to see better spelling though, but besides that, i couldnt say that this could be any better. |
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Re: Forever Alone
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:27:43 AM AEST
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yeah this is great...i could completely understand what you are trying to say....well done and this is very moving
"You can't see the invisiable
You can't touch the untochable
You can't like what you can't see
And you and I will never be" i love that part, it sounds awesome!!!!!
take care and try and keep ur chin up!!!! |
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Re: Forever Alone
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 06:35:04 PM AEST
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Wow... Nice Write... So much Feelings Great Write !!!!!!!!!!!
p.s Thanks for the comment on my poem
"My empty arms reach out for you" |
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Re: Forever Alone
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:54:07 PM AEST
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This is a great poem...i have felt this way for so long now....it touched me in so many ways....excellent job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears
P.S. check ur spelling a little better |
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