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Standing Alone
Contributed by
Moshi_Moshi
on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 01:54:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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In the darkness I wait alone
I go where I'm not known
I light a match to so I can see
Deep inside, I want to be free
You see a girl
You try not to hurl
Blood and a scar
You know she's not
I feel pain
I have nothing to gain
In the darkness I wait
For my undecided fait
You see a light on her
You walk closer
To get a good look
It looks like something out of a book
It hurts to move
Everyone always tell me to improve
I just hurt myself
To save yourself
You liked me like a lie
You always wanted me to die
So I'm here in the dark
And I've left my mark
I will never let you change me
I am what you will see
I will I am down to the bone
Even if it means by standing alone
Copyright ©
Moshi_Moshi
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2005-01-17 01:54:40]
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Re: Standing Alone
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:02:40 AM AEST
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| Good write. I really enjoyed it. :-) |
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Re: Standing Alone
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by Kuro_Mirai on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:12:34 AM AEST
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| Awesome job, Moshi Moshi! I'm glad you finally decided to post your own poetry. It's really good, keep writing! |
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Re: Standing Alone
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:13:25 AM AEST
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| i liked this very much...the last stanza is very empowering....well done..good write |
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Re: Standing Alone
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by loopylou on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 03:56:44 AM AEST
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| I love taht last line...its brings a perfect powerful ending! |
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Re: Standing Alone
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 09:19:56 AM AEST
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and with this read, you've gained a fan!
Cool name! |
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