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Wild Horses
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 07:54:18 AM in AEST
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Wild Horses
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Watching you grow-up
Love fills my heart
Im overcome with pride
Right from your start
I see things in you
The world is in need of
Your tender and gentle way
Your heart full of love
But like a wild horse
You were meant to be free
To explorer the person
You want to be
To see the world
To drink of her fruit
To serve your country
In which you salute
But when your wondering
Days are through
I hope you return
To a heart thats true
Never dormant
In my heart youll stay
For when you return
Wild horses couldnt keep me away
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Re: Wild Horses
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by killingmehslowly on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:34:21 AM AEST
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| This is absolutly a great poem. It really paints a pretty picture too. And I like the title, it's eye-catching. *ish a horse fanatic* Not what I expected from the title, but I still like it. Especially the last line, "Wild horses couldn't keep me away" Good write. |
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Re: Wild Horses
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by juliette on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:31:56 PM AEST
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What a darling write - makes me think of my three year old, and his not yet overboard sense of independence. He is such a "wild horse". As always =), loved your write!
Thanks for sharing!
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