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The Ship in the Storm
Contributed by
Lee
on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 10:17:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Miniature gold beaters
So many fish eaters
Can you catch the card cheaters?
Down 'round them parts
You might find a ghost
Holding on to a candy heart
Impulsive
Can it be?
Repulsive
Is it he?
Propulsion
How fast is free?
I tried to batten down the hatches
With a box of wet matches
A large elephant conquered the seaspray
And a little boy harnessed a molecular ray
This was the story of the ship in the storm
To the howling wind and raging water
Its hull would not confrom
Copyright ©
Lee
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2005-01-17 10:17:34]
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Re: The Ship in the Storm
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by arden on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 08:36:59 PM AEST
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interesting lee.
didnt really fully grasp it. but still enjoyed it.
well written and creative.
Becky |
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Re: The Ship in the Storm
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by Anne-ish on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 10:09:08 PM AEST
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| This is delightfully bizarre. It has a classic touch...oriental-sounding. Glad I read it. Each stanza got better and better as I read along. Seriously. |
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