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Pain
Contributed by
Sinned
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Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 11:17:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Pumping squeezing little drops
Veins O'mine carry hurting love
Memories of our happiness flee
Love of my veins stop and clot
Just the thought of losing you
A chest burning blue
Losing your love I felt to be true
You never knew what it is to lose
Arms that held you ache and burn
Wishing for another turn
I lost your love yet I yern
Thumping in my chest came to pause
Pleding begging all for naught
Still your in my everyday thought
My heart once pumping passion red
Now a trepid tap almost dead
I question why you fled
The pain I hold inside
Tears I shed I continuly hide
Blue is my heart now fat and wide
Pray you will never know the hurt
I feel my heart is going to burst
I ask you please don't follow my hurst
Sinned
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Sinned
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2005-01-17 11:17:11]
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Re: Pain
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by givingin on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 11:27:46 AM AEST
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I really like this poem,
I felt great passion in it.
GREAT WRITE
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Pain
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:49:29 AM AEST
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This squeezing feeling is painful beyond words, but you have described it well. With God at your side, you can come out stronger.
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