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Less of Me
Contributed by
socialburnin
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Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 11:22:02 AM in AEST
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Theres less to me then these stories will tell
How I stopped and watched as you fell
Where were you when it stopped?
When my heart strings snapped and your lungs popped
All implications point to me
As the reason for your disease
Im not so clear on what to do
Should I run away or see this through?
Lets stay in line and form two groups
The half I take will breath out smoke
No sin is too outrageous
No devil will outstage us
So let your beauty still unfold
Let yourself be trapped at home
Ill stifle all your light
Cut you off and the world will die
Just because I seem to hate you
Doesnt mean that I dont love you
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socialburnin
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2005-01-17 11:22:02]
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Re: Less of Me
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by givingin on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 11:37:05 AM AEST
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This is a very nice poem,
I especially like the last 2 lines.....
keep up the great work
MUAH
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Less of Me
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by givingin on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 11:44:47 AM AEST
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This is a very nice poem,
I especially like the last 2 lines.....
keep up the great work
MUAH
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Less of Me
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by apcfan on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 12:11:38 PM AEST
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Awesome write!
Keep writing!
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