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Hiding from You
Contributed by
killingmehslowly
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Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:04:03 PM in AEST
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I make you worry
Something I can't stand to do
Harsh words we exchange in fury
I'm sorry I keep hurting you
Look over my shoulder, reading my conversation
Stare at the screen and don't make a sound
You can cause me so much aggrivation
I guess what goes around comes around
I can't stand the way I hide
You want to know everything
Including what I keep bottled up inside
Or why I no longer love to sing
There are somethings no one should know
Like the emotions I struggle so hard not to show
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2005-01-17 14:04:03]
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Re: Hiding from You
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:18:07 PM AEST
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Full of emotion and sadness. written well.
Hope things work out 4 u. |
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Re: Hiding from You
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by EternalNight4x on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 03:31:20 PM AEST
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| excellent write, well expressed. I can relater very much |
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Re: Hiding from You
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by juliette on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 07:33:20 PM AEST
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Thought - evoking write!
If you have someone who cares about what is really going on inside of you - let them in and you can share the load. =)
Good work!
Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Hiding from You
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by Unheard_Mute on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:53:50 PM AEST
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| I love it sami... just don't know who it's directed at... your mom? dad? fluffy? |
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