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I'm Giving You My Permission
Contributed by
cuddlytiger17
on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 06:46:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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Eat me alive
From the inside out.
But start slowly,
Inching your way in
Masking your sinister intents;
Leaving me gullible
With a false pretense.
Then engulf me with your hatred,
Punish me for what youve said
Take me as your victim,
And begin your malicious process:
Swallow my fluids,
Gnaw on my organs,
Pierce my spinal cord,
Drain my strength,
And consume my soul.
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cuddlytiger17
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2005-01-17 18:46:57]
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Re: I'm Giving You My Permission
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 07:15:17 PM AEST
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| Intense write. |
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Re: I'm Giving You My Permission
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:11:17 PM AEST
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| ...this poem has made me realize that ive spent too much time in biology...other than that good write. |
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Re: I'm Giving You My Permission
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:34:54 PM AEST
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| "A meal in itself" lol Seriously though, good write. |
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Re: I'm Giving You My Permission
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:49:38 PM AEST
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| Great write! I can imagine all sorts of sordid imagery here and in my current state of mind I can say I understand this piece very well. Once again, great write, I love it. |
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Re: I'm Giving You My Permission
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by classicfailedhero on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 10:00:23 PM AEST
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| pretty good, pretty neat |
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Re: I'm Giving You My Permission
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 10:50:58 PM AEST
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Seems like you are experimenting
here with a little gore.
Bitter stuff,
but I like that you are using
imaginative phrases.
--Ghosty |
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Re: I'm Giving You My Permission
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:39:49 PM AEST
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Scarcasm.... gosh it's just soooooo useful sometimes, isn't it? THIS is something I could see myself writing on a bad day but never being brave enough to post. Yeah for you for getting it out and putting it out there!!!!!
~SNM~ |
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