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Dream
Contributed by
MoldedClay
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Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 07:49:30 PM in AEST
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Slowly walking hand in hand
Leaving footprints in the sand
Nothing but the sound of air
walking along without a care
Bits of laughter float around
Feet seem not to touch the ground
Drifting off into space
Wishing to never leave this place
It seems so real but the mind plays tricks
As the sceanery slowly slips
Eyes slide open and daylight burns
Always wishing to return
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MoldedClay
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2005-01-17 19:49:30]
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Re: Dream
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by Whitelightning77 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 07:53:22 PM AEST
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cool write. liked lines 3/4 - always good to find those places.
thanks for sharing!
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Re: Dream
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:06:22 PM AEST
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| you wrote this very nicely. |
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Re: Dream
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by blueyes11 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:14:06 PM AEST
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| This summoned up some memories of great dreams I have had. You really seemed to capture that stark contrast between the elation of a wonderful dream and the disappointment of the moment of waking. Good job! |
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