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A True Reflection
Contributed by
Bryon
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Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:05:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I see the struggles deep inside your eyes,
but I cant see just where the pain might end;
I do know all your happiness relies
upon your choice to wallow or transcend.
To try and solve these problems of the mind,
is not the answer to the mystery.;
My friend, you must leave intellect behind
imagine just how happy you could be.
Nobody has to live inside that hell,
that space of ugly discontent and fear.
It doesnt happen quickly, time will tell
but only you can get you out of there.
I see I havent gotten through at all
so much for talking to a mirrored wall.
Copyright ©
Bryon
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2005-01-17 20:05:49]
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Re: A True Reflection
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:34:52 PM AEST
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| you write very good sonnets. talking to a regular wall is better, at least then it doesnt look like its talking back =] |
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Re: A True Reflection
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:58:18 PM AEST
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| haha I thought you were talking to me..till the end..lovely.. |
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Re: A True Reflection
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by blueyes11 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:08:53 PM AEST
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| I really like your writing style. It's inspirational, actually. You got the gears turning in my head again.... |
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Re: A True Reflection
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:28:39 PM AEST
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| Nice description of self-struggle. Hope it gets better, truly. Blessings. |
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