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War of the Unwilling Heart
Contributed by
blueyes11
on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:44:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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How shall I rid myself of you,
You tormentor of my heart?
You, who stirs up the warm pool of delight,
Then poisons it with cruel reality?
How shall I eradicate you,
You intrusive puzzler of truth?
You, who casts ambiguous shadows,
When I am most desperate for clarity?
How shall I quench you,
You incessant rhythm?
You, who pounds and resonates,
Then falls silent as I decipher your pulse?
How shall I conquer you,
You brilliantly veiled enemy?
You, who are my misery incarnate,
When I have no will to conquer at all?
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Re: War of the Unwilling Heart
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:57:30 PM AEST
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| interesting concept. |
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Re: War of the Unwilling Heart
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by Marisa_A_Sydney on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:57:42 PM AEST
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| very nice. i like it. ; ) |
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Re: War of the Unwilling Heart
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:22:17 PM AEST
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| The worst kind of infatuation is the illogical one. Turning it into something that feels like an enemy is creative. Nice write! Cheers! |
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Re: War of the Unwilling Heart
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by clowns_can_burn on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:31:36 PM AEST
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things happen for a reason i guess....
Great write |
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Re: War of the Unwilling Heart
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by Evilcaf on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:15:40 AM AEST
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| hard to love them harder to leave them. nice write i liked it xx |
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