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no-named you
Contributed by
amos
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Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 02:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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with this all coming undone
with it all going to shame
its not known if its ok
all the personal problems with exacted revenge
here it is
............all alone
not allowed to say a thing
life it is life it won't
what do you know
what do you think
...........apart of me
in a wrong manner
nobody sees
here is time
no ones friend
lifes unjust lifes unfair. you scream aloud
this you preach do we really care?
for the answer that awaits no question
what do you know
what do you think
the crack in the surface you fell through
an amazement in birth and proud moment of death
how do you know
when to quit
again with nothing to say
not again
whats to understand
you're never here to win
there goes the heart you stole
drowning the heart you shattered in a cloud of what ifs
living this you don't realize
everythings so easy when you close your eyes
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2002-12-06 02:40:00]
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Re: no-named you
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 02:14:22 PM AEST
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| "Everything's so easy when you close your eyes"... how true... very good write amos! |
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Re: no-named you
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by OreO on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 02:00:32 PM AEST
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I agree that's my favorite part where it says everythings so easy when you close your eyes....you ended this poem beautifully amos....thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it...
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