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killing me
Contributed by
CoLD
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Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:45:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sink your knife a little deeper
Don't give time to ease the pain
Sink your knife a little deeper
Turn the blade and rip my flesh
My heart can't find where it belongs
and although it finds safety in you
You pull the knife with one last jolt
and suddenly i fall apart
and bleed all over the floor
And now that i'm empty, searching to fill the void
You get up slowly and walk out the door of my world
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CoLD
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2005-01-18 08:45:37]
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Re: killing me
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by prozac_memory on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 04:01:31 PM AEST
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lot of emotion, good write.
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Re: killing me
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by jace on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:58:56 AM AEST
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amazing feeling
I feel for you
the betrayel is evudent
keep writing it is your expression |
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