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My Mind
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 05:23:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My mind goes places
Journeys for miles
I can't even keep up
How can you?
Short sweet trips
never seem long enough
Distant treacherous ones
I can't seem to get enough
I can smile
as the trees go by
Climbing the mountains
though, get so tough
Roads paved with sharp stones
Oh, they can be so rough
My mind travels places
broke down a few times
never seems to quit
I need to rest
Need to end...
this senseless trip
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2005-01-18 17:23:01]
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Re: My Mind
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 05:57:08 PM AEST
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| Great write! |
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Re: My Mind
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 06:01:04 PM AEST
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| I think I know what ya mean..I scrape my knees a lot.. |
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Re: My Mind
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by zenmind on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 06:05:29 PM AEST
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| I like the way you use your words. Your poetry flows well. It is fun to read. It keeps me enthralled until the end of the poem. |
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