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Watch me BLeed
Contributed by
xPureEcstacy_Ashx
on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 05:31:56 PM in AEST
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*Please people do not steal songs and claim them as your own*
Writing up and down my arms
one little cut will do no harm
Watching my blood flow
I'll have no fear
Everything just dissappears
*chorus*~
Making my pain go away
Watching me bleed,
feel the pain
letting you know, what youve done to me
to show you my pain
'll make you watch me bleed.
I fall backwards on the bed
Close my eyes and let it sink in
Losing my breath
I will show no fear
I want you to know that you put me here
*Chorus*
Watching me bleed
I hope you see
What youve done to me
You'll have to watch me bleed.
I knew that this was the only way
To make you know and see
Are you watching me
Feel my pain
You should feel shame
What you did to me
You killed me....
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2005-01-18 17:31:56]
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Re: Watch me BLeed
(User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 05:48:16 PM AEST
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well...honestly i think its great,u should perhaps make it a bit longer,and it kinda sounds like ur on repeat,but in some cases thats considered good,but i can say whether or not its the best bc theres no melody to go with it,but i loved it as lyrics
savedbydeath
if ur into lyrics alot u should check out mine,almost all my writes r lyrics |
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