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I'm Your Child
Contributed by
Moshi_Moshi
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Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 05:45:47 PM in AEST
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I know I always cuss
You always made a big fuss
You told me to stop doing crack
But then I turn around and do it behind you back
I know I'm not nice
But you tried twice
To stab my heart
And make me fall apart
And now you stabbed me with a knife
And again tried to take my life
Now I'm in pain
But that's your game
I'm your child
But I'm not worth while
Get rid of me
And you will see
That you always gain
Seeing me in pain
I die to night
But that's alright
Copyright ©
Moshi_Moshi
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2005-01-18 17:45:47]
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Re: I'm Your Child
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by Kuro_Mirai on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 05:51:20 PM AEST
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| Once again, Moshi-Chan, you did wonderful! |
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Re: I'm Your Child
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by savedbydeath on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 06:13:09 PM AEST
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very interesting write,i'd rather not tell my father i'm his child,i'm ashamed of him,but meh,i really liked this poem,it shows alot with only a few words,great job,keep up the great work
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Re: I'm Your Child
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 06:46:41 PM AEST
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Konban-wa.
Suki desu.
--Ghosty |
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Re: I'm Your Child
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 01:30:18 AM AEST
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| Whoa...interesting write. I enjoyed it though. It was so raw and intense. |
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Re: I'm Your Child
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 09:27:40 AM AEST
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| this is how i use to feel, took moving to the otherside of the globe to realize that I was wrong. |
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