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Oedipus Complex
Contributed by
YellowBeetleSB
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Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 06:07:45 PM in AEST
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I got caught smoking outside
My mother cant stand to fear
Little does she know
All this morning Ive been drinking beer
I smoke, I drink, I sweat, I lie
And in truth its only just alibis
Masochism is my demise
I can only pray for the day that I die
Whipped and beaten, wrenched and drought
Beat and wrenched I will not forget
He said he loved me and excuses surmise
But I know all the better, I wish to die
Oedipus must have known the delight
To have his mother in such disdain
For when his father found out
Oedipus took his name in vain
And so I laugh and smoke and drink
Only time will tell
What will become of me?
I hope not for heaven but wish for hell.
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2005-01-18 18:07:45]
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Re: Oedipus Complex
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 06:09:16 PM AEST
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| Good write. The last stanza was especially powerful. Nice work. |
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Re: Oedipus Complex
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:18:55 PM AEST
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| Interesting work. Cheers. |
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