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The Long Road Home
Contributed by
Tanna
on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:25:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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They say that theres a paradise,
But I found its the long road home
My feet are bare and ragged
For now, I proceed to roam
The trail I follow has been a hard one
Littered with countless mistakes
Thousands of miles away but standing beside me
A bruised but graceful heart breaks
Slipping through my fingers
Sliding through my grasp
The journey is no longer mine to control
With anguished realization, I gasp
Moving away, moving on
Running out of time
Keenly I am aware
That Ive quickly outlived my prime
Home is my final destination
Through the mist I feel its golden glow
Drifting, drawing, beckoning me
Waiting for my turn to go...
Copyright ©
Tanna
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2005-01-18 20:25:55]
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Re: The Long Road Home
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by humboldthunny17 on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:30:36 PM AEST
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| Good write, but its sad. U expressed really well |
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Re: The Long Road Home
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:45:41 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write. My prayers are with you and your friend. |
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Re: The Long Road Home
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 06:08:36 AM AEST
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What an emotion sad write, you have writen this so well.
Im sorry for your pain. Great poem.
*hugs*
Jane xx |
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Re: The Long Road Home
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 05:17:27 PM AEST
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A beautifully themed and written poem. I especially liked the last stanza, which wrapped it up very well. Blessings to you, and to your loved one, wherever he or she now is.
Andrew |
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