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Black rose
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:00:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The feeling of her sweet soft lips
A picture I can't see
Her standing with a faded black rose
So dark you can't make out her expirations
Her action's hid by the darkness
Her tears blending with the rain
Her hair soaked and twisted across her face
Blood dripping from her wrist
She's watching me
She planned to kill me
Followed for years
Trails of blood everywhere
Black rose pedals blowing in the wind
The picture in my head dark and faded
The rose wilted like the life we lead
Her cool blade cutting my neck
I am haunted by these dreams
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2005-01-18 22:00:54]
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Re: Black rose
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by TaintedSoul on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:24:52 PM AEST
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Dark and surreal, just like I enjoy them. Great read.
peace
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Re: Black rose
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by iluvpencils on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:29:24 PM AEST
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Yeah..what they said...
Great imagery, I really got a picture in my mind and I'm sure it will stick with me. Nicely written. |
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Re: Black rose
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by iluvpencils on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:29:24 PM AEST
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Yeah..what they said...
Great imagery, I really got a picture in my mind and I'm sure it will stick with me. Nicely written. |
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Re: Black rose
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 12:33:04 AM AEST
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Wow that was such a dark write, great pictures are forming in my mind. A creative poem.
Jane x |
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Re: Black rose
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by savedbydeath on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 06:50:40 AM AEST
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WOW,that was estomishing,all that from a display pic,i really liked this,i really hope thats not what u dream of when ur dreamen of me,lol,this write as got to be the most dark write i've read either in a very long time for forever.i really really found this to be interesting,great write,keep them comen,love ya
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