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Invisibility
Contributed by
kisser89
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:11:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Invisible is what I am
What I know
A motionless statue in a world full of dreamers
When you walk past me without a glance, without any hope my soul cries
An endless stream of tears it sheds that mixes with my bleeding heart
I keep myself hidden behind a wall of stone
A wall of granite that is as lifeless as my spirit
I wonder if it will get any better
Any easier, but i doubt it
I feel as though my faith is gone and without that...
What is the point of going on?
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kisser89
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2005-01-19 16:11:21]
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Re: Invisibility
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by bttrflynajar on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 02:47:40 PM AEST
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as someone here once told me, i can tell this is from your heart... because of the flow...
its very descriptive, but it doesnt quite roll off the tongue... im not one to speak, but im just offering a suggestion. |
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Re: Invisibility
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by spazz911 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:28:37 PM AEST
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| i like this poem it is there.... but it is a little "practical"... still good write |
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Re: Invisibility
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by spazz911 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:28:57 PM AEST
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| i like this poem it is there.... but it is a little "practical"... still good write |
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Re: Invisibility
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by jessejames on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 07:12:56 PM AEST
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| nice job |
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