|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
BeautyDecay
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:13:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
Mourn for me naught, love,
For darkness embarks sweetly...
In death, freedom starts...
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
... [
2005-01-19 16:13:46]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: BeautyDecay
(User Rating: 1 )
by zenmind on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:21:38 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow, this one is a little different from what you usually write. I like this a lot. You have expressed a lot, in such a few words. That's why haiku's are great. This poem actually felt hopeful to me, in a very morbid way. The words you use----darkness compared to sweetly and death compared to freedom------make it actually feel hopeful even though your talking about dark things.
Be True,
zenmind |
|
|
Re: BeautyDecay
(User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 05:11:01 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
How often I wish for such freedom..
lovely.. who gives a hoot anymore about traditional haiku.. I think when it doesn't deal with nature it's got another name like haiki or something LOL.. HAI...AH...
anyway..loved it.. |
|
|
Re: BeautyDecay
(User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 01:27:26 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Few words that spek volumes my firend.
Supreme
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
|
|
Re: BeautyDecay
(User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 03:36:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Two words ... that is all I can come up with ... just two words ...
Beautiful, you
Nazmythian ~ |
|
|
Re: BeautyDecay
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 03:55:42 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Beautiful is right.
its awsome. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
