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Reasoning
Contributed by
dragondaughter
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:04:59 PM in AEST
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Suicides a choice
The only option
Thats left open
And yet Im still here
Running from my fears
Tortured by these years
With wounds that wont heal
Blood mixed with the tears
Loves proven a lie
Whishing I could die
But I wont be freed
Of my silent screams
For all eternity
Because I wont leave
Letting myself believe
That its so simple
To just fade away
The battle within
Grows so tiresome
But I wont give you
The satisfaction
Of my destruction
Copyright ©
dragondaughter
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2005-01-19 19:04:59]
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Re: Reasoning
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by Thumbsucker on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:17:56 PM AEST
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Hi there dragondaughter.
Verydark...very powerful...but still optimistic. I like how you've left a light at the end of the tunnel. Death awaits us all, (except those damn vampires), but why rush it? You never know what tomorrow might bring.
Shoot. I can't see to find the star rating thingy. I'll post this and look for it again. I'm totally uselss sometimes.
You take care dragondaughter.
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Re: Reasoning
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by wolfman on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 03:25:10 PM AEST
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it does seem that way when you get to that point chosing sicuide over life, but just know that there are some times when it may seem so pleasing that you want to, please dont. dont run to long from your fears or eles thay will get the better of you wounds always heal but the scars reman, there to remind us of what we have been though to get to this place in our lives and the tears mix with your blood to tell you that you dont want to do this. love is not a lie its just not respected by those who you want to respect it it a tough thing to deal with, and that is true that it isnt easy just giving up, and never give them the pleasure of your leting go dont let go ever.
this was a good write I enjoyd it thanks for posting it and please do post more. God bless.
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Re: Reasoning
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 11:22:12 AM AEST
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its hard to believe that so many people have these feelings, but they do. me though, i dont know what to do yet, i guess it all depends wether or not my love still loves me. something i will soon discover. good poem! :)
*~peace and love~* |
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