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Goat Hide
Contributed by
kratur
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:58:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Moses was royalty
Moses slept in the houses of kings
But when God called him out of that place
He promised Moses even greater things
I hate God
We all hate God
***ish God
**** You God
Moses led the people out of slavery
But all the people just wanted back in
Because God made them homeless for decades
And they ate the same thing every day
I cant love God if I fear Him
I cant trust God if I cant see Him
I cant believe in God if He doesnt believe in me
I cant worship God if this world is the best He can do
Moses trusted in the Lord
Moses talked to a burning bush
And when Moses wanted to see Gods face
God just showed him His ass
God is in a small box
That we call the Ark of the Covenant
God is just a statue stick
God is made of straw and brick
Eat beef, not pork
To this, do that
Torah Torah
Goat hide
God is all the gold on the green earth
God is everything with any worth
And the more of Him you acquire
The more you realize you cant take anything along when you die
Moses left his home
Restless for eighty empty years
And when at long last he set his eyes on the promised land
God struck him dead
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Re: Goat Hide
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by freckle on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 09:51:59 PM AEST
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Very interesting perspective on things conveyed in this poem. It seems to be an angry poem and a frustrated one. Personally, my beliefs differ from those expressed in the poem, but I think you did a good job of expressing them. Overall a decent write.
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Re: Goat Hide
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by youlied on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:31:35 PM AEST
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| -I love this poem. It's everything I believe in but couldn't find the right words to express...Keep it up.- |
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