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A Girl...
Contributed by
MyInspiration
on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Just a girlJust a friend,
To share my joy, to help me mend
Just on chance, to make things straight
Just one shot, for just one date.
Just a girlany girl
To change my life, to change my world
Just a feeling, in the pit of my stomach
Just love, to save me from that plummet
Just a girlthe girl
Just a friend, my friend
To find love, that will never end
Just this hope, that all will mend
Just this felling, that I wish to lend
Just a girlmy girl
Just my chance, my referral
I will be looking for you, my love
Looking for you; your dove
You life; my soul, your world, your whole
Just anyone, justa girl.
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2002-12-06 13:00:00]
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Re: A Girl...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 04:12:00 PM AEST
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Not sappy at all...it's beautiful...
Jenni |
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Re: A Girl...
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by Fiona on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 08:53:49 PM AEST
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| Wow hun, I loved it! Not sappy, but I would be worried if the title was "A Boy..." you know? hehe. Sorry, I'm a goof...Great write tho. Lots of Luv *Fiona* |
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Re: A Girl...
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by faffeee on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 10:34:42 AM AEST
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| this was a really good poem, simple but really heartfelt...i think we all get this feeling, i do LOTS of the time! its heartening to see a male member of the species sharing this longing, gives us gals some hope for the future...hehe :) thankyou, it was great to see what i've always felt turned perfectly into words (for: A Boy...)! xxx |
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