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Dead Ringer
Contributed by
Diatribe
on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:59:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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And he said...
"hide your face in mine
no, I don't mind
even though you do...
and you can cry through my eyes
if you'd like...
they belong to you"
coming
becoming
I'll be coming for...
... I'm becoming you.
I shatter my image
every time I dislike
the way it looks back at me
I'll be running from...
... The becoming of you.
Copyright ©
Diatribe
... [
2005-01-19 20:59:25]
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Re: Dead Ringer
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:01:52 PM AEST
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Excellent write!
""hide your face in mine
no, I don't mind
even though you do...
and you can cry through my eyes
if you'd like...
they belong to you""
Beautiful! |
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Re: Dead Ringer
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by Kione on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:04:25 PM AEST
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| Keep up the good work, You seem to be pretty good :) |
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Re: Dead Ringer
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 02:04:03 AM AEST
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| *****, Shawyn, this rocks!!! |
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Re: Dead Ringer
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 02:08:15 AM AEST
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| Wow. Loved everything about this poem, esp the first verse. Excellent piece. |
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