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A Tear
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:38:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I tell you how I feel
Though you don't reply
You don't care for me
And so I cry
I asked for the truth
All I got were lies
It just proves I'm nothing more
Then this lonesome nice guy
Your a dream that'll never be
You make me feel like I wanna die
I love you but your to blind to see
Your to blind, so good bye
The end is near
So after I die
Please...
Dont shed a tear
Becouse..
I'll taste a tear...
of my own eyes
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-01-19 22:38:01]
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Re: A Tear
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 11:41:45 PM AEST
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| Good write. I especially liked the ending. Very emotional. |
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Re: A Tear
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by MorbidDeath on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 01:10:34 AM AEST
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so descriptive it certainly makes you see the other's point of view in these situations, it's deffinately to the point , beautiful
Caitlyn |
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Re: A Tear
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 02:31:42 PM AEST
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| Great write, i feel the pain within these lines |
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