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alone
Contributed by
bexsiebaby666
on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 01:13:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Pretty and popular, u never knew,
exactly what she went thru,
ar school she was the centre of a crowd,
always talking and laughing out loud,
when she got home, she took off her mask,
and slowly tackled a homework task,
she stopped midway as if in a trance,
walked past her mirror, stealed a glance,
turned around and threw her fist,
breaking the mirror with glass in her wrist,
the blood surfaced after a minute,
at last she had reached the limit,
dragging the glass along her skin,
her life had started to spin,
she fell to the ground,
without a sound,
she died,
her eyes wide,
alone,
she had blown,
alone,
she was thrown,
alone.
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2005-01-20 01:13:14]
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Re: alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 03:09:17 AM AEST
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this was really good, fast moving which added to the ambience of it considering the subject matter.
the last 7 lines were really effective.
keep posting, raelly enjoyed reading this x |
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